Upon reflection I feel the use of masculine colors really helped to portray my model as a masculine person however I also feel it restricted my TA to only males s the color scheme throughout is very masculine.
My magazine genre is acoustic and from my own research I found that the top button being undone was a convention of acoustic guitarists, by instructing my model to do so i found it worked well in portraying him as a stereotypical acoustic player.
Overall, you need more evaluative comments such as 'upon reflection'. Think about what has worked well/could have gone better and what you would do differently if you had the chance. I think you can do better than this, Sam. Remember to aim for excellent!
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